We started the class off with the desert survival guide
activity again. Wilson and I set up the situation a little better this week, having
them close their eyes and truly imagine that they are in the situation. Having
8 kids made it tremendously better because they had two groups of 4, and really
had to work together to come to decisions on each item in terms of importance.
They all achieved synergy because their group scores were lower than their
individual scores.
We tied this activity back to the imitation learned in the
egg activity and talked about inspiration from your peers. We then transitioned
into a highly successful imitation writing activity. Same as last week, we
passed out four different styles of writing and had the students read them.
Initially they were all really hesitant to read and a couple even didn’t start
reading and were just staring into space. However, once a buzz started about
how cool a couple of the pieces were, they came around.
By the time we finished reading, everyone seemed to be
relatively engaged. However, the best part was when we told them all to select
their favorite piece and write something in the style of that writer. Again,
there was a little initial resistance but once they got started it was the most
productive activity thus far in the week. There were several really notable
things that happened:
- Two of the kids (not friends before the week) teamed up and wrote parallel essays that complemented each other. With no prodding or suggestions from Wilson or I, they simply started giving each other feedback and helping each other, while using combined ideas to write two separate pieces. One of these kids practically was refusing to write anything yesterday, and seemed to thoroughly enjoy this activity.
- One kid who has been very indifferent to the majority of activities found a style that he was interested in and ended up writing a really good dialogue piece.
- Two kids took on the palindrome poem (same forwards and backwards) and wrote really good poems from it, which is a very advanced writing form for students their age.
- We gave them a lot of freedom to talk and interact, and they still were very productive, almost more so than when they were quietly writing. Further dismantling this idea that silent individual work is the most productive.
After about 20 minutes, they shared with their partners and
discussed what they were doing well and needed to improve. Wilson and I also
circled throughout the room, working individually with each student and giving
them things to work on. We also had them discuss with their partner what in
particular that they liked about the writing style/selection that they chose,
in order to help them further improve their piece. They then spent a few more
minutes improving and finalizing their work.
Thoughts from the first part of the day:
- Allowing them to create a “finished product” in the imitation activity turned out to be a great idea for a lot of them. Though it didn’t seem to change the mindset of all the kids, several seemed to be more proud of their work.
- The imitation activity is a great way to bypass this creative block that many of them have (that I suspect is from the standardized way that they are used to being taught in class with prompts, etc.) It’s nice because we sort of were able to trick them into being creative. They still made up their own writing and ideas about things they were interested in, we just gave them individual goals to shoot for.
- To this point in the day, we really accomplished a lot of the improvements and ideas that we had discussed after class yesterday to engage the students more and improve their experience. Almost all of our feedback and discussions were in small groups rather than the large group where they tend to get bored.
- When students feel more comfortable with their peers, they are much more attentive in a lot of ways which is interesting. Today, as the class environment improves as they get to know each other, it seems as though they actually focus better which is the opposite of what you might expect.
- Wilson and I are getting good at allowing each other to talk for longer when one of us is on a roll and really connecting with the students.
After a snack break, we transitioned into speaking. To
continue our theme of imitation, we showed them three inspirational sports
movie speeches. The “Remember the Titans Gettysburg Speech”, the “Miracle final
speech (Herb Brooks)”, and the “Friday Night Lights halftime speech by coach
Gaines”. After each speech, we brainstormed quickly as a class what the coaches
did well and what techniques they used to make their speeches especially
powerful.
We broke the students up into small groups and had them all present
one of the speeches to the rest of their group with all the emotion and passion
that they could put into it. Wilson and I circulated the room and helped them with the specific skills that they were working on. After a debrief of that activity, we started working on hooks.
Our structure of a presentation continues to be based on: hook, engaging the audience, conveying information, and powerful ending. Today we started with the hook. First, Wilson and I showed a couple TED talks and had the students break down what was good about the start of the presentation. We brainstormed different ways to draw the audience in.
Next, we had the kids do a couple practice hooks on random topics such as pokemon, bacon, pterodactyls, and water. The goal is to make a short presentation (15-30 seconds) with your partner that makes us care and want to keep listening. After two practice topics, we had them start developing the hook for their own presentation. The students all worked individually on creating an entertaining and suspenseful hook. We tried to get them to make the hooks relatable and something that is somewhat unexpected that gets the audience curious.
Thoughts on the day:
- Far better than the first day. Our goal is to not necessarily drastically improve the technical skills of the kids because most of them will most likely forget those small changes, but to give them an experience where they truly enjoy writing and learning. That will be much more impactful.
- Having the skills to write a really good hook can be crucial to learning how to make great presentations and writing.
A lot more thoughts to come in the next couple posts!